Whats wrong with it ,Drop shadow ,graduation of colour in the lettering ,Arc,positive ,negative slant and boat colour background .I thought it gave someone a pretty good starting point in the world boat lettering.And I think archaic is if 10000 year old Puerto Rican indians wrote in english there,
"Crazy Taino" . I went to commercial art school for 8 months buddy and I am still colour blind!